tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-507131588328031600.post6317802680449019950..comments2024-03-11T12:50:36.553+05:30Comments on परिकल्पना: लौटा है शीत जब से गाँवरवीन्द्र प्रभातhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11471859655099784046noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-507131588328031600.post-5757606947548758322008-11-10T16:30:00.000+05:302008-11-10T16:30:00.000+05:30कविता अच्छी लगी. कम शब्द.. सुंदर भाव..कविता अच्छी लगी. कम शब्द.. सुंदर भाव..पुनीत ओमरhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09917620686180796252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-507131588328031600.post-80043746708594923862008-11-10T10:03:00.000+05:302008-11-10T10:03:00.000+05:30सुंदर रचना के लिये बधाई स्वीकारेंसुंदर रचना के लिये बधाई स्वीकारेंयोगेन्द्र मौदगिलhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14778289379036332242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-507131588328031600.post-66586301201366158722008-11-10T05:50:00.000+05:302008-11-10T05:50:00.000+05:30बहुत ही सुन्दर भाई. बेहतरीन. जल्दी ही मुलाकात होने...बहुत ही सुन्दर भाई. बेहतरीन. जल्दी ही मुलाकात होने वाली है.Udan Tashtarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06057252073193171933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-507131588328031600.post-47727015524841331202008-11-10T05:17:00.000+05:302008-11-10T05:17:00.000+05:30सुन्दर लिखा जी।सुन्दर लिखा जी।Gyan Dutt Pandeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05293412290435900116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-507131588328031600.post-46864983120130119812008-11-09T23:26:00.000+05:302008-11-09T23:26:00.000+05:30मौसम की आँखों में महुए सी ताजगी ,दिखती है खुल करके...मौसम की आँखों में महुए सी ताजगी ,<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>दिखती है खुल करके धुप की नाराजगी ,<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>गुड की डाली खाके सोया है देर तक -<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>मतवाला सूरज है अलसाया आज भी ,<BR/><BR/>..................<BR/>Waah ! kya kahun..... adbhud !Adwiteey !<BR/><BR/>shbdon me prakriti kee anupan sundarta ko baandhkar, aapne aur bhi adbhut, manohari banakar nayanabhiraam kar diya.<BR/>Sadhuwaad.रंजनाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01215091193936901460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-507131588328031600.post-36132121770814084712008-11-09T21:29:00.000+05:302008-11-09T21:29:00.000+05:30aap jaise guni logon ka hausala-afjai to preran ke...aap jaise guni logon ka hausala-afjai to preran ke kabil hai .. meri nai ghazal pe aapki upasthi chahta hun agar sambhav ho to..."अर्श"https://www.blogger.com/profile/15590107613659588862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-507131588328031600.post-55103386681902571262008-11-09T20:06:00.000+05:302008-11-09T20:06:00.000+05:30nazakat nfasaton ke shahar ke logon me itni nazaka...nazakat nfasaton ke shahar ke logon me itni nazakat hoti hai lekhan me muje to pata na tha.<BR/>bahot hi umda lekhan maza aagaya ..."अर्श"https://www.blogger.com/profile/15590107613659588862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-507131588328031600.post-32463110998411427572008-11-09T19:44:00.000+05:302008-11-09T19:44:00.000+05:30bahut khubsurat shabdon aur ehsaas sundar badhaibahut khubsurat shabdon aur ehsaas sundar badhaiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com